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Stubborn and . . .

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I was going to full out color this .. . but i'm lazy, and this is finals week, and I'd feel guilty if I did ^^. So here's a possible Makorra? More just them arguing. Gosh Mako was hard to draw.

the text was just cuz I had no idea what to do with the background . . .

Don't own 'em
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Wow, guys, thanks for all the faves! I'd love some critique though . . . it'd be nice to know where I could improve and stuff.

Edit Couple people have asked for what they're thinking . . . here's most of their thoughts, though at the end of it I was making random stuff up ^^

Mako: Ugh, why does she have to be so stubborn all the time, she’s totally ridiculous and reckless, you’d think as Avatar she’d be more responsible, but noooo, she’s the always trying to save everybody and not even think about taking care of herself, she’ll get hurt saving some kid’s pet or putting out a fire when someone else could do it just as well . . . (and then some random words)

Korra: Pah, he is so stubborn and over-protective, why can’t he just go with the flow and stop worrying all the time, especially when he keeps saying I’m in danger when I can clearly take care of myself. I’m not some damsel in distress, so he just needs to get over himself and stop being so obnoxious and worrying all the time about everything. Of course, in regards to Bolin that’s fine, but I can take care of myself.
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EPSON
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Epson Stylus NX420
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So neat. I really like the composition and the idea behind it. I haven't seen anything else like this in the body of Korra fanart, so many kudos to you for originality! :D

I actually like how you left these two sketchy and in plain blue and red. It emphasizes the artsy side to it and really makes the pictture pop. To be quite honest, it's what drew me to this picture in the first place. The one thing that did stand about a bit there was the the color change in Korra is a lot fainter than it is in Mako and the page, which makes her stand out a bit in that regard, unless that was the point.

The thoughts in the background are really interesting and I like it. :heart: You also chose fonts that worked really well for their personalities, which I thought was really cool. And I like how Mako has an arm crossing over the line between the two sides, so that it isn't completely cut off.

The only thing I would say to change is a little bit on anatomy. I know it's just a sketch and goodness knows that you did a lot better on making them look like themselves than a lot of people do, but that would be my one critique for next time. Mako's arms, especially his upper arms, should be longer, I think. And I would reallly love to see Korra in a not quite so profile pose. I keep on wanting to see her shoulder off to the side or something.

But anyway, sorry about the long comment. I really love this piece. Definitely a fave. :D